Added: Oct 10, 2008

From: frozenberry94

Duration: 0:11

Messages from the writer - 1 - I'm looking for comments from 10 DIFFERENT people before i post the next one, so comment me and tell me what you think! 2 -Sorry it takes me a while to get new episodes up, school keeps me really busy. I'm doing my best to keep posting them, though, so PLEEZ SUB!!- *** Jose - [Turning to look] Melissa? Melissa - Yeah, did you miss me? Jose - Yeah, I guess I did. What're you doing here? Melissa - I came to see the show, why else would I be here? Jose - [kind of dazed] uh... I don't know Monti - Yeah, thats a good point. Would you girls excuse us for a sec? [Pulls the Menudo guys away from the girls] Jose, are you crazy? Jose - What? Carlos - We thought that you liked Stephanie! Jose - I do! I cant be happy to see that my ex-girlfriend doesnt hate me? Emma - I'd think that you'd want to be a little more concerned that your future one doesn't hate you Jose - you guys are acting like I'm the only one who likes one of those girls. Don't act like you guys don't like them Chris - What the heck are you talking about? Carlos - Now that I think about it, you're the worst of all [pointing at Chris] Chris - Now you really are crazy! I can't be nearly as bad as you are with Holly Monti - With Erin around, you are Emma - Says the one who's crushing on Eliza Jose - You're worse with Eva Monti - Okay! We've all established who we like. Can we focus on getting rid of Melissa now? Carlos - Good idea, but how do we do that? Chris - I don't know if we have to worry about that, [points at the girls] look *Back with the girls* Melissa - You all like the guys, don't you? Girls - Yeah, how'd you know? Melissa - Because you're all giving off the same vibe I did when I was dating Jose [laughing at the look on Stephanie's face] don't worry, we broke up a long time ago, and were just friends now. I take it you like Jose? Stephanie - Yeah, I do. I'm Stephanie by the way and from left to right this is Erin, Holly, Eva and Eliza Melissa - Glad to meet all of you. Oh, Erin, do you like Chris? Erin - [blushing] Yeah, how'd you guess? Melissa - You're wearing his jacket Eliza - She's right, you still are Erin - Hey, it's comfortable! Melissa - [Looking at her watch] Oh crap, I've gotta go! Here's my number [hands Erin a slip of paper] call me any time. See ya! Girls - Bye! [Wave] *Just then, the guys come back over* Jose - Well, looks like you girls were hitting it off Stephanie - Yeah, she's really co-cool [yawns] Chris - Well, it looks like you guys are tired. You want a ride home? Erin - You're not driving, right? Chris - No... Eliza - Then wed love one! Monti - [Laughing along with everyone else] And we'd love to give you one! Erin - There's just one problem, my parents are out late and I don't have a key to get into my house Carlos - You could all crash on our tour bus with us Eva - That sounds awesome! Emma - Come on, then. Theres something we want to talk to you about, anyway *They lead the girls out onto their tour bus, where the girls go into shock at its awesomeness* Erin - [Sitting down on the couch] Whoa Eva - This... Eliza - Is... Holly & Stephanie - Awesome! Carlos - Glad you like it. There are actually a couple things we want to talk to you about Chris - [Sitting down next to Erin] You see, were touring and it can get pretty boring Erin - Yeah... Jose - So we were wondering if you girls wanted to tour with us Holly - Are you kidding us? Wed love to! Carlos - Sweet! Theres actually one more thing *The guys turn to their girls* Menudo - Will you be my girlfriend? Girls - [After going into shock for a second] YES! *They all get ear-to-ear smiles on their faces and pull their girls into tight, rib-cracking hugs. Later on, they all fall asleep* Erin & Chris - [Sleeping together on the couch] Carlos & Holly - [Both sleeping in a chair] Emma & Eva - [Crashed on the floor next to each other] Stephanie & Jose - [Propped up against the couch together, both asleep] Monti & Eliza - [Sleeping on the floor together, as well] WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN ON TOUR? FIND OUT WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN IN THE NEXT EP!

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Rating: 5.00 (1 ratings)    Views: 108    Comments: 13

nlt1rules Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - luv it i cant wait to c what happens next

djpuppy85 Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - Love it! Can't wait till the next :D

bluebear14 Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - I'm not evil! HOORAY!!! lol. Awesomeness! "*They lead the girls out onto their tour bus, where the girls go into shock at its awesomeness*" - haha Need more, Erin :D

tylercisthe14me Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - that eas great erin we need more lolz

ElizaMunoz Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - I sound so boring in da story!!lol!

ElizaMunoz Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - i love this story!!

ElizaMunoz Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - da story is getting better and better!!

ElizaMunoz Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - I LOVE MONTI!!YUP DATS MY BOO!!

taebochina925 Says:

Oct 10, 2008 - OMGGGGGG!!!! Can I just saw that this ep. was sooooooo amazing!!!!! I'm like in love with your writing!!!!! It never gets boring, it just gets better each time!!!! I love it so much!! I can't wait until the next one. Great Job!!! =D

EvaNgo111 Says:

Oct 11, 2008 - yay chiqa! <3

frozenberry94 Says:

Oct 11, 2008 - Yeah, when I started writing, i was just thinking to myself, "Melissa's too nice, I can't make her evil," so I made you a nice ex instead

frozenberry94 Says:

Oct 12, 2008 - Sorry!

djpuppy85 Says:

Oct 12, 2008 - Love the story!!! Cant wait till the next