Added: Oct 7, 2008

From: MrsNickJonas0207

Duration: 0:35

Ok so is the girl in the picture not the LUCKIEST girl in the world? I mean shes in the ocean with 2 out of the 3 hottest guys on the planet. (And yes thats their friend Mandy. And yes, the Mandy from the song Mandy) And just to warn you. It get's graphic about halfway through. I put another warning right before it, so look for that if you don't wanna read it. **************************** Zanna's P.O.V. I drove over to Kevins to say Happy Birthday to Nick. Kevin greeted me at the door before I even knocked. He practically dragged me towards his car. "Come on. I have to show you something" Kevin said. We started driving, but he pulled over. He started to put a blindfold on me. "What's this for?" I asked. "Just wear it. We'll be there soon" I could tell Kevin was smiling by the tone of his voice. We drove some more, when the car stopped. "Are we here?" I asked. "Almost" Kevin said. I heard him open his door and close it. He lead me to a building I assume because he opened the door and we stepped inside. He walked me a little farther and stopped. I felt him slide my blindfold off and I was bracing myself for something amazing. But it was pitch black. I stood there confuzed and Kevin seemed to be walking away. Then all of a sudden an Eiffel Tower glistened in front of me. It looked just like the real one, and Kevin was standing under it. He had the biggest smile on his face and I stood there speechless. He walked toward me and took my hands. "What do you think?" He smiled. "Kevin" I said breathlessly. "It's....perfect" I finally managed. Kevin's smile got even bigger and he lead me right under it. "Zanna, I love you so much" Kevin said. Then, like in all the stories and movies, Kevin got down on one knee and pulled a small box out of his pocket. "Zanna, will you marry me?" Kevin asked while opening the box. "Yes" I smiled. He stood up and slowly slid the ring on my finger. I stared at the ring and tears of happiness slid down my cheek. We looked at eachother with the biggest smiles in the world. I put my arms around him and we kissed. Just like they do in fairytales. Nick's P.O.V. We stared into eachothers eyes for what seemed like forever. But we leaned in again and I felt our lips collide. We stood there kissing so intensly I couldn't breathe. We pulled away but only for a second. I ran to quickly lock my door and then dove right back into the kiss. We collapsed onto my bed. My curls fell into my eyes but I didn't care. I moved my mouth away from her lips and onto her neck. I placed kisses along down her neck and back up. I let my face hover above hers for a second. She smiled and gripped my shirt, pulling me back down. ***It get's graphic here. So if you dont want to read it just go down to where you see more stars lining the page. I warned you ;)*** I felt her run her hands over my abs and I smiled into the kiss. I felt her inching the bottom on my shirt up so I pulled it off. She rolled us over so she was on top. She stopped to peel her shirt off. And the went back to kissing me. Lauren's P.O.V. I felt my hands go to touch his jean zipper. He realized what I was thinking and quickly peeled his skinny jeans off. I felt his hands on my jean zipper, but he stopped to see if I was okay with it. I deepen the kiss as to tell him yes and I feel my jeans slide off of me. We kept kissing and I suddenly realized Nicks hands were inching their way up my back. I felt him touch my bra clasp. I felt it release and he tossed it somewhere. I was feeling a little uncomfortable because this was the farthest I had gone with a guy. But it was Nick. I loved him and he loved me. We kept kissing and I felt something pressing into my leg. I was confuzed for a second, but then I realized what it was. ( A.N. I think we know what is. But ask me if you dont) And I also realized that there were only two thin pieces of clothing between doing something that would change both our lives forever. I pulled away and Nick looked a little confuzed. "Are you okay? Did I do something wrong?" Nick whispered worridly. "No. Your fine, but I think we need to stop" I said. Nick looked down at himself and blushed. I giggled to myself as he did. "Hey, I can't help it. I'm a man" Nick smiled. I smiled and got up. We rushed to get our clothes and I brushed my hair back with my hands and looked in his mirror to make sure I didn't look like I almost had sex with Nick. I turned around to see Nick staring at me. "What?" I asked. "Nothing. I'm just so happy were back together. I love you so much" Nick said while putting his arms around my waist. "I love you too" I smiled. Nick's P.O.V. Oh. This was by far the best birthday ever. ************************************* O-M-G. Did Nick and Lauren almost go too far? And YAY!! Kevin and Zanna are going to get married!! Could he of proposed any cuter? I mean if you can't go to Paris, this was definatley the next best thing! And where has Joe been this entire time? 27 comments

Channel: Entertainment

Tags: brothers  graphic  joe  jonas  kevin  lauren  little  love  nick  story  warning  zanna 


Rating: 4.56 (9 ratings)    Views: 1141' favoriteCount='1    Comments: 25

nickjismine0001 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - WHEn kevin proposed that was soooo cute!!!!!!

BrzlBabeRockin Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - Kevin and Zanna 4eva and eva!!!

sophiebracht Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - awsome chapter please post more soon pleaseee!

marylovesjonas Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - llllllllllllove it=]

KickFlipANDShowChoir Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - aww. i was smiling the whole time when i was reading how kevin was proposing. like seriously, i was like..aww :D nick and lauren..wowzaa. at least they stopped just in time. imagine if they didnt stop...o_o that could have been very bad! but seriously..where HAS joe been?!? hmm... ~*Zanna*~

mrslaceyjonas13 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - 184 veiws but only 11 comments? what the heck! if people look/read the story, they should post a comment! because then we would get like 8 chapters a day!! btw cute between kevin and zanna and whoa between nick and lauren!!

WalkingOnAirKerli Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - yeah!! Kanna forever!

MrsNickJonas0207 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - haha. yeah kevin is a sweetie! and um yeah i just saw you have like 9 comments! so thats like practically 10! please post!

Shaylynnnn Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - more please!!

KeNiJoee Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - loved it so much! more please!

RedWithALilBitOfHot Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - that was the cutest way to propose!! i wish i had a boyfriend like that!!

StepInMYShoes Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - holy crap! so many views but so little comments!! i love this story!! i need more please post soon!!

iiTZzNESSAx3 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - oh snap !! wait a second . was the almost sex nicks present ? aha , cause i`m pretty sure that can`t be wrapped in a small box :D

StoryReader1 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - more soon im hoping?!?

selenademifan43 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - please post soon im DYING without it!!

KeepyourPromisesGirl Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - haha. that would be interesting... just imagine lauren wrapping herself up as a birthday present.. lol

CouldYouBeThe1 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - aw=ww Kevin and Zanna are SOO cute!! now they DEFFINETLY should do it. lauren and nick got pretty close but thats okay because it was still awesome!! i hope joe comes back into the story soon!

KickFlipANDShowChoir Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - lol i might post. JUST THIS ONCE though! because if i keep letting you guys off easy ill never get enough comments!

PassThePlateDuuude Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - 1 of my fav chap.!!!

GetLikeYouNahh Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - please post soon!!!

YousaidWHAT43 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - post again plz!!

TaterTot97 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - heheheheheheheheh kevin and zanna should do what exactly? xD

maddiex122 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - nick and lauren!! omg. bad! lol can't wait until next chap! :]

jannieleigh15 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - omg awesome

MrsNickJonas0207 Says:

Oct 8, 2008 - oh yes you will! it just takes time to get subscribers! i remember when i used to have like 6